Cue: stylistic changes as pointed out by @x42

diff --git a/include/clip-stretch-options.html b/include/clip-stretch-options.html
index 11c4196c469718b51d9dc42c5f19aac4abfbd26c..52c29f1f96d1dafbdec1c8e9319903d0f91f2536 100644 (file)
--- a/include/clip-stretch-options.html
+++ b/include/clip-stretch-options.html
@@ -2,17 +2,17 @@
 
 <p>
        When you load an audio clip into a trigger slot, Ardour applies some
-       heuristics to estimate its temo in beats per minute. If neither the file
-       name nor the metadata specify it, Ardour will use
-       <a href="https://github.com/breakfastquay/minibpm">minibpm</a> to analyze
-       the file assuming it has a fixed tempo.
+       heuristics to estimate its temo in beats per minute. Unless a metadata
+       in the file source provides information,
+       <a href="https://github.com/breakfastquay/minibpm">minibpm</a> is used
+       to analyze and detect the file's BPM.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-       After estimating the tempo, Ardour will enable stretching for the clip
-       to make it match session's bpm at any given time. This means that should
-       session's tempo change over time (in either ramped or constant mode),
-       Ardour will re-stretch all audio clips to accomodate for that.
+       After tempo is estimated, the clip is time-stretched to match the
+       session's tempo map. This means that should session's tempo change over
+       time (in either ramped or constant mode), all audio clips will be
+       re-stretched to accomodate for that.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -36,9 +36,8 @@
 <h2>BPM</h2>
 
 <p>
-       This is where Ardour displays the estimated tempo rounded to the closest
-       integer. You can progressively divide or mutiply by two whatever Ardour
-       thinks is the original tempo.
+       This is where the estimated tempo is displayed. It can also
+       be progressively divided or mutiplied by two.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -48,10 +47,10 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-       If you divide the estimated clip's tempo by 2, you get 45bpm. Stretching it
-       back to 120bpm will make it sound faster. And multiplying the original
-       clip's tempo by 2 will make it 180bpm. Stretched down to 120bpm, the clip
-       will sound slower than it originally is.
+       If the estimated clip's tempo is divided by 2, stretching the resulted
+       45bpm back to 120bpm will make the clip sound faster. Vice versa,
+       multiplying the original clip's tempo by 2 and then stretching it down
+       from 180bpm to 120bpm will make the clip sound slower than it originally is.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Clip Length</h2>