Rephrasing export-dialog intro

diff --git a/include/export-dialog.html b/include/export-dialog.html
index 91a969940ae3ac259a7690fd147a51f33a6bd9a6..16d42aa1eba357220b07a412163559925b5c5f22 100644 (file)
--- a/include/export-dialog.html
+++ b/include/export-dialog.html
@@ -1,8 +1,11 @@
 
 <p>
-  When a session is finished mixing, one probably wants to export it to a sound
-  file to burn to a CD, upload to the web, or whatever. <kbd class="menu">Session &gt; Export &gt; Export to Audio file(s)&hellip;</kbd>
-  shows the Export Dialog to do this.
+  When the work in Ardour is finished, one or multiple sound file(s) need to be
+  created, be it to be printed to a medium such as a CD or DVD, uploaded to a
+  streaming site or sent to another person or software for further work. This
+  can be done either using <kbd class="menu">Session &gt; Export &gt;
+  Export to Audio file(s)&hellip;</kbd>, or <kbd class="menu">Session &gt;
+  Export &gt; Stem Export&hellip;</kbd>.
 </p>
 
 <figure class="center">
@@ -12,11 +15,6 @@
   </figcaption>
 </figure>
 
-<p>
-  The outputs of multiple tracks and busses all at once can also be exported via
-  <kbd class="menu">Session &gt; Export &gt; Stem Export&hellip;</kbd>.
-</p>
-
 <h2>File Format</h2>
 
 <p>