simplify wording/2nd person

(2nd person works best for technical writing)

diff --git a/include/create-midi-regions.html b/include/create-midi-regions.html
index d323308b1c16e5c94f0cc7721a9fb0c288f427ef..37e761e62f214a8d57297983f80c5cda9a565543 100644 (file)
--- a/include/create-midi-regions.html
+++ b/include/create-midi-regions.html
@@ -4,19 +4,18 @@
   often desirable to do so as part of editing/arranging.
 </p>
 <p>
-  Create a new MIDI region is as simple as entering draw mode (press
+  To create a new MIDI region with the mouse, simply enter draw mode (press
   "d" or click on the pencil tool) and then <kbd
-  class="mouse">Left</kbd>-clicking in a MIDI track. A region will be created
+  class="mouse">Left</kbd>-click in a MIDI track. This creates a region 
   that is one bar long. Alternatively, use the left button to
   drag-create a new region of the desired length.
 </p>
 <p>
   Once the region exists, to trim it to a different length, switch
   back to grabber/object/select mode (press "g" or click on the
-  grabber tool). It can then
-  be <a href="@@trimming-regions">trimmed</a> to any length desired.
+  grabber tool). Then <a href="@@trimming-regions">trim</a> to your desired length.
 </p>
 <p>
-  Once a region has been created, <a href="@@add-new-notes">some notes</a>
-  should be added to it.
+  Once the region is ready, <a href="@@add-new-notes">add some notes</a>
+  to it.
 </p>