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diff --git a/include/transport-clocks.html b/include/transport-clocks.html
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--- a/include/transport-clocks.html
+++ b/include/transport-clocks.html
@@ -1,5 +1,10 @@
 
-<img src="/images/new_main_clocks.png" alt="An image of the transport clocks in Ardour" />
+<figure>
+  <img src="/images/new_main_clocks.png" alt="The transport clocks in Ardour">
+  <figcaption>
+    The transport clocks in Ardour
+  </figcaption>
+</figure>
 
 <p>
   <dfn>Clocks</dfn> in Ardour are used to display <dfn>time values</dfn> precisely.
@@ -8,14 +13,14 @@
   which is described below, but a few clocks serve particularly important roles.
 </p>
 <p>
-  In the transport bar of the editor window there are two clocks (unless you
-  are on a very small screen), that display the current position of the playhead
+  In the transport bar of the editor window there are two clocks (on a large enough
+  screen), that display the current position of the playhead
   and additional information related to transport control and the timeline. These
   are called the <dfn>transport clocks</dfn>; the left one is the primary
   transport clock and the right one is the secondary transport clock.
 </p>
 <p>
-  All the clocks in Ardour share the same powerfull way of editing time. Refer to
+  All the clocks in Ardour share the same powerful way of editing time. Refer to
   <a href="@@editing-clocks">Editing Clocks</a> to learn how.
 </p>
 <p>
@@ -35,8 +40,8 @@
 <h2>Why are there two transport clocks?</h2>
 
 <p>
-  Having two transport clocks lets you see the playhead position in two different
-  time units without having to change any settings. For example, you can see the
+  Having two transport clocks allows seeing the playhead position in two different
+  time units without having to change any settings. For example, one can see the
   playhead position in both timecode units and BBT time.
 </p>
 
@@ -44,7 +49,7 @@
 
 <p>
   In addition to the time-unit modes, each of the two transport
-  clocks (if you work on a small screen, you may only have one) can be
+  clocks (again, on a sufficiently large screen) can be
   independently set to display <dfn>Delta to Edit Point</dfn> in whatever time
   units its current mode indicates. This setting means that the clock shows the
   distance between the playhead and the current edit point, and it may show a
@@ -69,7 +74,7 @@
 <p>
   To show the current playhead position in a big, resizable window, activate
   <kbd class="menu">Window &gt; Big Clock</kbd>. The big clock is very useful
-  when you need to work away from the screen but still want to see the playhead
+  when working away from the screen but still wanting to see the playhead
   position clearly (such as when working with a remote control device across
   a room). The big clock will change its visual appearance to indicate when active
   recording is taking place. Below on the left is a screenshot showing a fairly
@@ -77,6 +82,11 @@
   the same clock during active recording.
 </p>
 
-<a href="/images/bigclock.png"><img src="/images/bigclock.png" height="100" alt="an image of the big clock filling a screen"></a>
-<a href="/images/bigclock-recording.png"><img src="/images/bigclock-recording.png" height="100" alt="an image of the big clock while recording"></a>
+<figure>
+  <a href="/images/bigclock.png"><img src="/images/bigclock.png" height="100" alt="The big clock filling a screen"></a>
+  <a href="/images/bigclock-recording.png"><img src="/images/bigclock-recording.png" height="100" alt="The big clock while recording"></a>
+  <figcaption>
+    The Big Clock, with no transport rolling (left) and recording (right).
+  </figcaption>
+</figure>