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@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
   which is described below, but a few clocks serve particularly important roles.
 </p>
 <p>
-  In the transport bar of the editor window there are two clocks (unless you
-  are on a very small screen), that display the current position of the playhead
+  In the transport bar of the editor window there are two clocks (on a large enough
+  screen), that display the current position of the playhead
   and additional information related to transport control and the timeline. These
   are called the <dfn>transport clocks</dfn>; the left one is the primary
   transport clock and the right one is the secondary transport clock.
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@
 <h2>Why are there two transport clocks?</h2>
 
 <p>
-  Having two transport clocks lets you see the playhead position in two different
-  time units without having to change any settings. For example, you can see the
+  Having two transport clocks allows seeing the playhead position in two different
+  time units without having to change any settings. For example, one can see the
   playhead position in both timecode units and BBT time.
 </p>
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 
 <p>
   In addition to the time-unit modes, each of the two transport
-  clocks (if you work on a small screen, you may only have one) can be
+  clocks (again, on a sufficiently large screen) can be
   independently set to display <dfn>Delta to Edit Point</dfn> in whatever time
   units its current mode indicates. This setting means that the clock shows the
   distance between the playhead and the current edit point, and it may show a
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
 <p>
   To show the current playhead position in a big, resizable window, activate
   <kbd class="menu">Window &gt; Big Clock</kbd>. The big clock is very useful
-  when you need to work away from the screen but still want to see the playhead
+  when working away from the screen but still wanting to see the playhead
   position clearly (such as when working with a remote control device across
   a room). The big clock will change its visual appearance to indicate when active
   recording is taking place. Below on the left is a screenshot showing a fairly
@@ -79,4 +79,3 @@
 
 <a href="/images/bigclock.png"><img src="/images/bigclock.png" height="100" alt="an image of the big clock filling a screen"></a>
 <a href="/images/bigclock-recording.png"><img src="/images/bigclock-recording.png" height="100" alt="an image of the big clock while recording"></a>
-