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 <p>
-  Within this general idea several behavior variations are available
+  Within this general behavior several variations are available
   as Ripple edit modes:
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@@ -53,9 +53,9 @@
     <kbd class="button">Del</kbd>, this will remove the selected portion
     of either audio or MIDI without shifting other clips to the left to match
     the freed space on the timeline. The main use case for this mode is editing 
-    interviews where you want ripple behavior to edit out periods of silence,
-    while being able to just delete e.g. an out-of-place exclamation by the
-    interviewer.
+    interviews where you want the ripple behavior to edit out e.g. periods
+    of silence, while being able to just delete e.g. an out-of-place
+    noise or an exclamation by the interviewer.
   </li>
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