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 <p>
   Ardour is designed to work best with a <dfn>three button mouse</dfn>
-  equipped with a <dfn>scroll wheel</dfn>.
-</p>
-<p>
-  It can be used with a two button mouse or touchpad, but at least two key
-  operations will not (easily) be available to you:
+  equipped with a <dfn>scroll wheel</dfn>. While it can be used with a two
+  button mouse or touchpad, at least two key operations will not be (easily)
+  available:
 </p>
+
 <ul>
   <li>time-constrained region copying</li>
   <li><a href="@@generic-midi-learn"><abbr title="Musical
   Instrument Digital Interface">MIDI</abbr> bindings</a>
   created by "learning" them from incoming MIDI data</li>
 </ul>
+
 <p>
-  You are strongly encouraged to invest in a three-button mouse. You will
-  find that a good quality mouse (especially one with a weighted,
-  latchable scroll wheel) will make your use of Ardour vastly more
-  efficient. They are cheap, and time is not.
+  It is strongly encouraged to invest in a three-button mouse. A good quality
+  mouse (especially one with a weighted, latchable scroll wheel) will make the
+  use of Ardour vastly more efficient. They are cheap, and time is not.
 </p>
+
 <p>
-  For more detailed instructions, see
-  <a href="@@using-the-mouse">Using the mouse</a>.
+  For information on how to use the mouse in Ardour, see <a
+  href="@@using-the-mouse">Using the mouse</a>.
 </p>