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@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 
 <figure class=right>
 <img src="/images/gain-envelope1.png" alt="Default gain envelope">
-<figcaption class=center>A typical gain envelope (green line).</figcaption>
+<figcaption>A gain envelope (in green).</figcaption>
 </figure>
 
 <p>
@@ -26,21 +26,20 @@
 <p>
   The default gain curve, by itself, is not very useful; in order to have more
   control over the shape of the gain envelope it is necessary to add extra
-  control points. To add a control point to the envelope, click anywhere in the
-  region where there are no existing control points; it will appear <em>on the
+  control points. Clicking anywhere in the region where there are no existing
+  control points adds a control point to the envelope; it will appear <em>on the
   line</em> at the X-axis of the mouse's current position in the region.
 </p>
 
-<figure class=center>
+<figure class="center">
 <img src="/images/gain-envelope2.png" alt="Complex gain envelope">
-<figcaption class=center>A more complex gain envelope.</figcaption>
+<figcaption>A more complex gain envelope.</figcaption>
 </figure>
 
 <p>
-  Once added, a control point can be <kbd class=mouse>Left</kbd> clicked and
+  Once added, a control point can be <kbd class="mouse">Left</kbd> clicked and
   dragged to the desired location. Hovering over a control point will show its
-  current level in dB. To remove a control point, <kbd class=mouse>Left</kbd>
-  click it and press <kbd>Delete</kbd>, or <kbd class=mod3n></kbd><kbd
-  class=mouse>Right</kbd>-click on it.
+  current level in dB. <kbd class="mouse">Left</kbd> clicking a control point
+  and pressing <kbd>Delete</kbd>, or <kbd class="mod3 mouse">Right</kbd>
+  clicking a control point deletes it.
 </p>
-