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 <p>
   Like a normal aux send, an <dfn>external send</dfn> taps the signal at a
-  specific within a channel strip, but delivers it to an external application
+  specific point within a channel strip, but delivers it to an external application
   or piece of hardware rather than an Ardour bus. By itself, an external
   send has no effect whatsoever on the audio signals within Ardour&mdash;it
   is a one-way signal routing that leaves all existing signal processing
   just as it was.
 </p>
 <p>
-  Most people will not have much use for this, but it can be useful if you
-  want to experiment with external applications or hardware signal processing
-  applications.
+  Most people will not have much use for this, but it can be useful to experiment
+  with external applications or hardware signal processing applications.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Adding an External Send</h2>
 <p>
-  Context-click on the
+  Context-clicking on the
   <a href="@@processor-box">processor box</a> in a
-  channel strip (at the desired location, pre or post fader) and choose
-  <kbd class="menu">Add new External Send</kbd>. A dialog will appear
-  containing the standard Ardour
-  <a href="@@patchbay"><dfn>patchbay</dfn></a> to allow
-  you to connect the send to the desired destination.
+  channel strip (at the desired location, pre or post fader) and choosing
+  <kbd class="menu">Add new External Send</kbd> will show a dialog containing the
+  standard Ardour <a href="@@patchbay"><dfn>patchbay</dfn></a> to allow
+  to connect the send to the desired destination.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Removing an External Send</h2>
-<p>You can remove an external send in several ways:</p>
+<p>An external send can be removed in several ways:</p>
 <ul>
-<li><kbd class="mouse mod3">Right</kbd>-click the send in the processor box.</li>
-<li>Position the pointer over the send and press the <kbd>Del</kbd> key.</li>
-<li>Position the pointer over the send and press <kbd class="mod1">x</kbd>.</li>
-<li>Context-click the send and choose either <kbd class="menu">Cut</kbd> or
-  <kbd class="menu">Delete</kbd>.</li>
+<li><kbd class="mouse mod3">Right</kbd>-clicking the send in the processor box and
+  choosing either <kbd class="menu">Cut</kbd> or <kbd class="menu">Delete</kbd>.</li>
+<li>Selecting the send (with a single <kbd class="mouse">left</kbd> click) and
+  pressing the <kbd>Del</kbd> key.</li>
 </ul>
 
 <h2>Altering Send Levels</h2>
 <p>
   Just below the send in the processor box is a small fader that can be used
   like all other faders in Ardour to control the gain applied to the signal
-  delivered by the send. Drag it to alter the level, Shift-click to restore
+  delivered by the send. Dragging it alters the level, Shift-click restores
   to unity (0dB) gain.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Disabling Sends</h2>
 <p>
-  Click the small "LED" in the send display within the processor box to turn
+  Clicking the small LED in the send display within the processor box turns
   it on and off. When turned off, silence will be delivered to the send. When
   turned on, the signal within the channel strip will be delivered.
 </p>
 <h2>Editing Send Routing</h2>
 <p>
-  Double-clicking or Edit-clicking on the send in the processor box will
-  redisplay the patchbay dialog that allows you full control over the routing
-  of the send.
+  Double-clicking on the send in the processor box will re-display the patchbay
+  dialog that gives full control over the routing of the send.
 </p>
-