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 <p>
-  Like a normal aux send, an <dfn>external send</dfn> taps the signal at a 
-  specific within a channel strip, but delivers it to an external application 
-  or piece of hardware rather than an Ardour bus. By itself, an external 
+  Like a normal aux send, an <dfn>external send</dfn> taps the signal at a
+  specific point within a channel strip, but delivers it to an external application
+  or piece of hardware rather than an Ardour bus. By itself, an external
   send has no effect whatsoever on the audio signals within Ardour&mdash;it
-  is a one-way signal routing that leaves all existing signal processing 
+  is a one-way signal routing that leaves all existing signal processing
   just as it was.
 </p>
 <p>
-  Most people will not have much use for this, but it can be useful if you 
-  want to experiment with external applications or hardware signal processing 
-  applications.
+  Most people will not have much use for this, but it can be useful to experiment
+  with external applications or hardware signal processing applications.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Adding an External Send</h2>
 <p>
-  Context-click on the 
-  <a href="@@processor-box">processor box</a> in a 
-  channel strip (at the desired location, pre or post fader) and choose 
-  <kbd class="menu">Add new External Send</kbd>. A dialog will appear 
-  containing the standard Ardour 
-  <a href="@@patchbay"><dfn>patchbay</dfn></a> to allow 
-  you to connect the send to the desired destination. 
+  Context-clicking on the
+  <a href="@@processor-box">processor box</a> in a
+  channel strip (at the desired location, pre or post fader) and choosing
+  <kbd class="menu">Add new External Send</kbd> will show a dialog containing the
+  standard Ardour <a href="@@patchbay"><dfn>patchbay</dfn></a> to allow
+  to connect the send to the desired destination.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Removing an External Send</h2>
-<p>You can remove an external send in several ways:</p>
+<p>An external send can be removed in several ways:</p>
 <ul>
-<li><kbd class="mouse mod3">Right</kbd>-click the send in the processor box.</li>
-<li>Position the pointer over the send and press the <kbd>Del</kbd> key.</li>
-<li>Position the pointer over the send and press <kbd class="mod1">x</kbd>.</li>
-<li>Context-click the send and choose either <kbd class="menu">Cut</kbd> or 
-  <kbd class="menu">Delete</kbd>.</li>
+<li><kbd class="mouse mod3">Right</kbd>-clicking the send in the processor box and
+  choosing either <kbd class="menu">Cut</kbd> or <kbd class="menu">Delete</kbd>.</li>
+<li>Selecting the send (with a single <kbd class="mouse">left</kbd> click) and
+  pressing the <kbd>Del</kbd> key.</li>
 </ul>
 
 <h2>Altering Send Levels</h2>
 <p>
-  Just below the send in the processor box is a small fader that can be used 
-  like all other faders in Ardour to control the gain applied to the signal 
-  delivered by the send. Drag it to alter the level, Shift-click to restore 
-  to unity (0dB) gain. 
+  Just below the send in the processor box is a small fader that can be used
+  like all other faders in Ardour to control the gain applied to the signal
+  delivered by the send. Dragging it alters the level, Shift-click restores
+  to unity (0dB) gain.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Disabling Sends</h2>
 <p>
-  Click the small "LED" in the send display within the processor box to turn 
-  it on and off. When turned off, silence will be delivered to the send. When 
+  Clicking the small LED in the send display within the processor box turns
+  it on and off. When turned off, silence will be delivered to the send. When
   turned on, the signal within the channel strip will be delivered.
 </p>
 <h2>Editing Send Routing</h2>
 <p>
-  Double-clicking or Edit-clicking on the send in the processor box will 
-  redisplay the patchbay dialog that allows you full control over the routing 
-  of the send.
+  Double-clicking on the send in the processor box will re-display the patchbay
+  dialog that gives full control over the routing of the send.
 </p>
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