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-<p>In addition to this documentation, you may check a variety of other
-<dfn>resources</dfn>:</p>
+<p>
+  In addition to this documentation, there are a variety of other
+  <dfn>resources</dfn>:
+</p>
+
 <ul>
-  <li>the <a href="https://ardour.org/whatsnew.html">Ardour release
-  notes</a></li>
-  <li>the <a href="https://community.ardour.org/forums">Ardour
-  Forums</a></li>
+  <li>the <a href="https://ardour.org/whatsnew.html">Ardour release notes</a>
+  </li>
+  <li>the <a href="https://discourse.ardour.org/">Ardour Forums</a></li>
   <li>information about <a href="https://community.ardour.org/community">Ardour
   Support</a> via mailing lists and IRC (chat)</li>
 </ul>
+
 <p>
   The <dfn>IRC channels</dfn> in particular are where most of the day-to-day
-  development and debugging is done, and there are plenty of experienced
-  users to help you if you run into problems.<br />
+  development and debugging is done, and there are plenty of experienced users
+  to help if problems are encountered when using Ardour.
+</p>
+
+<p>
   Please be prepared to hang around for a few hours, the chat is usually
-  busiest from 19:00&nbsp;UTC to 04:00&nbsp;UTC. If you can, keep your chat
-  window open, so that you don't miss a belated answer.
-</p>  
+  busiest from 19:00&nbsp;UTC to 04:00&nbsp;UTC. It is best to keep one's IRC
+  client window open if possible, so that a belated answer can be seen.
+</p>