Major reordering of Part IV, including some section cleanup.

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 <p>
-  <dfn>Sessions</dfn> are stored in a single folder on your computer's filesystem. 
-</p>
-<p>
-  The first time you run Ardour, you will be asked where you would like the
-  default location for sessions to be, with the initial choice being your 
-  home folder. 
+  <dfn>Sessions</dfn> are stored in a single folder on the computer's
+  filesystem. The first time Ardour is run, it will ask for the default location for this folder, with the initial choice being the current user's home folder.
 </p>
+
 <p>
-  After the first-run dialog, you can still change the default location at 
+  After the first-run dialog, the default location can still be changed at 
   any time via <kbd class="menu">Edit &gt; Preferences &gt; Misc &gt; Session
-  Management</kbd>. You can also specify a particular (different) location for 
-  a session when creating it, in the 
-  <a href="@@newopen-session-dialog">New Session dialog</a>.
+  Management</kbd>. A particular (different) location for a session can also be
+  specified when creating it, in the <a href="@@newopen-session-dialog">New
+  Session dialog</a>.
 </p>