More rephrasing, detailing the interchange page

[ardour-manual] / include / stem-exports.html

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 <p>
-  <dfn>Stem exports</dfn> are covered fully in the
-  <a href="@@mixdown">Export</a> chapter. A stem export creates one file
-  per track, starting at the beginning of the session. You can then import
-  each track into another DAW and begin working on it. You lose all data
-  except the actual audio/MIDI (no plugins, no automation). This is one of
-  the most common methods of interchange because it works between all DAWs.
+  <dfn>Stem exports</dfn> are covered fully in the <a href="@@mixdown">Export</a>
+  chapter. A stem export creates one file per track, starting at the beginning of
+  the session. Each track can then be  imported into another DAW.
+</p>
+<p>
+  All data will be lost except the actual audio/MIDI (no plugins, no automation).
+  This is one of the most common methods of interchange because it works between
+  all DAWs.
 </p>
-