Continuing the rephrasing

[ardour-manual] / include / session-templates.html

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--- a/include/session-templates.html
+++ b/include/session-templates.html
@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
-  
+
 <p>
-  <dfn>Session templates</dfn> are a way to store the setup of a session 
-  for future use. They do not store any <em>audio</em> data but can store:</p>
+  <dfn>Session templates</dfn> are a way to store the setup of a session
+  for future use. They do not store any <em>audio</em> data but can store:
+</p>
 <ul>
   <li>The number of tracks and busses, along with their names</li>
   <li>The plugins present on each track or bus (if any)</li>
@@ -10,22 +11,22 @@
 
 <h2>Creating a Session Template</h2>
 <p>
-  Choose <kbd class="menu">Session &gt; Save Template</kbd>. A dialog will ask 
-  you for the name of the new template.
+  The <kbd class="menu">Session &gt; Save Template</kbd> shows a dialog asking
+  for the name of the new template.
 </p>
+
 <h2>Using a Session Template</h2>
 <p>
-  In the New Session dialog, choose the desired template from the combo 
-  selector.
+  In the New Session dialog, a combo selector allows to choose the desired
+  template.
 </p>
-<p>
-  Note that you can also use an existing session as a template, without 
-  saving it as one. This is available as an option in the New Session dialog. 
-  Doing this will not alter the existing session at all, but will use its track, 
-  bus and plugin configuration just like a template.
+<p class="note">
+  An existing session can also be used as a template, without saving it as one.
+  This is available as an option in the New Session dialog. Doing this will not
+  alter the existing session at all, but will use its track, bus and plugin
+  configuration just like a template.
 </p>
 <p>
-  See also <a href="@@adding-tracks-busses-and-vcas">Adding Tracks and Busses</a> for information 
-  on templates for individual tracks or busses.
+  See also <a href="@@adding-tracks-busses-and-vcas">Adding Tracks and Busses</a>
+  for information on templates for individual tracks or busses.
 </p>
-