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@@ -18,22 +18,21 @@
 
 <h2>Inserting Patch Changes</h2>
 <p>
-  Ensure that the
-  <a href="@@edit-point-control">edit point</a> is
-  located where you want the patch change to be (within an existing
-  MIDI region). Context click, and from the MIDI region's context menu,
-  select <kbd class="menu">MIDI &gt; Insert Patch Change</kbd>. A
-  dialog will appear allowing you to set the bank and program values.
+  To insert a patch change, the <a href="@@edit-point-control">edit point</a>
+  should be located where the patch change should be (within an existing MIDI
+  region). When <kbd class="mouse">right</kbd> clicking, and from the MIDI
+  region's context menu, selecting <kbd class="menu">MIDI &gt; Insert Patch
+  Change</kbd>, a dialog appears allowing to set the bank and program values.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Modifying Patch Changes</h2>
 <p>
   Context-clicking on a patch change will bring up the same dialog that
-  was used to create it, allowing you to modify the program and/or bank
+  was used to create it, allowing to modify the program and/or bank
   numbers.
 </p>
 <p>
-  You can also use the mouse wheel: <kbd class="mouse">&uArr;</kbd>/<kbd
+  The mouse wheel can also be used: <kbd class="mouse">&uArr;</kbd>/<kbd
   class="mouse">&dArr;</kbd> on the patch change will alter the program
   number, <kbd class="mouse mod1">&uArr;</kbd>/<kbd
   class="mouse mod1">&dArr;</kbd> will modify the bank number.
@@ -41,15 +40,15 @@
 
 <h2>Moving Patch Changes</h2>
 <p>
-  Just <kbd class="mouse">Left</kbd>-drag on the patch change to move it
+  Just <kbd class="mouse">Left</kbd>-dragging the patch change moves it
   around.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Removing Patch Changes</h2>
 <p>
-  Put the mouse pointer into the rectangular area, and press <kbd>Del</kbd>
-  or use the delete mouse button operation. This will remove the patch change
-  (the operation can be undone).
+  Pressing <kbd>Del</kbd> with the mouse pointer into the rectangular area, or
+  using the <kbd class="menu">delete</kbd> mouse button operation will remove the
+  patch change (the operation can be undone).
 </p>
 
 <h2>Names for Patch Numbers: MIDNAM files</h2>
@@ -57,4 +56,3 @@
 <p class=fixme>
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 </p>
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