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[ardour-manual] / include / osc58-personal-monitoring-control.html

diff --git a/include/osc58-personal-monitoring-control.html b/include/osc58-personal-monitoring-control.html
index 43ca8c1fc54662c7a4d156c643a13b4abfd64877..54123281ae65ce77b8ed82b84f7b295945fcd962 100644 (file)
--- a/include/osc58-personal-monitoring-control.html
+++ b/include/osc58-personal-monitoring-control.html
@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@
                <li>
                        Connect the output of that bus to one of the audio
                        interface's playback ports that is not otherwise used. OSC
-                       will now include this bus in it's list of aux busses as it
-                       no longer has it's output connected to the Master bus.
+                       will now include this bus in its list of aux busses as it
+                       no longer has its output connected to the Master bus.
                </li>
                <li>
                        Add an aux send to each channel the performer needs to hear
@@ -53,12 +53,29 @@
        A good easy to use controller that fits on most phones while still
        being controllable even with big fingers might look like:
 </p>
-<img alt="TouchOSC Screenshot"
-     src="/images/osc-cue-screen.jpg">
+<table>
+ <tr>
+  <td>
+       <figure>
+       <img alt="TouchOSC Screenshot"
+       src="/images/osc-cue-touchosc.jpg">
+    <figcaption>Personal Monitor controller using TouchOSC</figcaption>
+       </figure>
+  </td>
+  <td>
+       <figure>
+       <img alt="Control Screenshot"
+       src="/images/osc-cue-control.jpg">
+    <figcaption>Personal Monitor controller using Control</figcaption>
+       </figure>
+  </td>
+ </tr>
+</table>
+
 <p>
        Ardour is not limited to talking to one personal monitor controller
        at a time, but is able to deal with many simultaneously, each controlling
-       it's own Aux bus.
+       its own Aux bus.
 </p>
 <p class="note">
        The send controls and feedback all have the send id (1 to n) in line