More passive form, missing screenshot

[ardour-manual] / include / note-selection.html

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--- a/include/note-selection.html
+++ b/include/note-selection.html
@@ -1,22 +1,21 @@
 
 <h2>Selecting/Navigating note-by-note</h2>
 <p>
-  Tab selects the next note. <kbd class="mod1">Tab</kbd> selects the previous
+  <kbd>Tab</kbd> selects the next note. <kbd class="mod1">Tab</kbd> selects the previous
   note. <kbd class="mod3">Tab</kbd> or <kbd class="mod13">Tab</kbd> adds
   the next/previous note to the selection.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Selecting notes with the mouse</h2>
 <p>
-  While in mouse object mode, you can click on a note to select it. Once you
-  have selected one note, <kbd class="mouse mod3">Left</kbd>-click on another
-  to select all notes between them. To add or remove a note to/from the
-  selection, click <kbd class="mouse mod1">Left</kbd>. You can also click and
-  drag outside of a note to <dfn>rubberband select</dfn> a series of notes.
+  While in mouse object mode, any note can be clicked to select it. Once a note
+  has been selected, <kbd class="mouse mod3">Left</kbd>-clicking on another
+  selects all notes between them. Adding or removing a note to/from the
+  selection is done by <kbd class="mouse mod1">Left</kbd> clicking it. Clicking and
+  dragging outside of a note <dfn>rubberband selects</dfn> a series of notes.
 </p>
 <p>
-  Three different selection operations are possible if you switch to mouse
-  range mode:
+  Three different selection operations are possible while in mouse range mode:
 </p>
 <ul>
   <li>
@@ -37,7 +36,6 @@
 <p>
   If <kbd class="menu">Edit &gt; Preferences &gt; MIDI &gt; Sound MIDI notes
   as they are selected</kbd> is enabled, Ardour will send a pair of
-  NoteOn/NoteOff messages through the track, which will typically allow you to
+  NoteOn/NoteOff messages through the track, which will typically allow to
   hear each note as it is selected.
 </p>
-