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@@ -5,21 +5,21 @@ title: Video Timeline and Monitoring
 
 <h2>Introduction</h2>
 <p>
-The integration of a video timeline and video monitoring into Ardour 3.x allows for convenient audio mixing and editing to video ie soundtracks, music videos, TV post production etc.
+The integration of a video timeline and video monitoring into Ardour 3.2 allows for convenient audio mixing and editing to video ie soundtracks, music videos, TV post production etc.
 </p>
   
 
 <p>
-Ardour 3.x sessions provide facilities to:
+Ardour 3.2 (and later) facilities to:
 </p>
 <ul>
 <li>Import a single video and optionally extract the soundtrack from it.
 </li>
-<li>Provide a Video-monitor window, or full-screen display, of the imported video in sync with any of the available ardour timecode sources.
+<li>Provide a Video-monitor window, or full-screen display, of the imported video in sync with any of the available Ardour timecode sources.
 </li>
 <li>Display a frame-by-frame (thumbnail) timeline of the video.
 </li>
-<li>time-offset the video
+<li>time-offset the video.
 </li>
 <li><em>Lock</em> audio-regions to the video: Move audio-regions with the video at video-frame granularity.
 </li>
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ Ardour 3.x sessions provide facilities to:
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-Furthermore setup is modular and can be configured in different ways, including:
+Furthermore, the setup is modular and can be configured in different ways, including:
 </p>
 <ul>
 <li>One machine: all video decoding, video monitoring and Ardour audio
@@ -49,6 +49,4 @@ Ardour does <strong>not</strong> :
 </li>
 </ul>
 
-<h2>Subtopics</h2>
-
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