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 title: Deleting Objects
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+<p>
+  Within the Editor window (and to some extent within the Mixer window too),
+  there are several techniques for <dfn>deleting</dfn> objects (regions, 
+  control points, and more).
+</p>
 
-  
-  <p>Within the Editor window (and to some extent within the Mixer window too), there are several techniques for deleting objects (regions, control points, and more).</p>
 <h2>Using the mouse and keyboard</h2>
-<p>Select the object(s) and then press the Delete key. This does <strong>not</strong> put the deleted object(s) into the cut buffer, so they cannot be pasted elsewhere.</p>
-<h2>Using normal cut and paste</h2>
-<p>Select the object(s) and then press <kbd class="mod1">x</kbd>. This puts the deleted object(s) into the cut buffer so that they can be pasted elsewhere.</p>
+<p>
+  Select the object(s) and then press the <kbd>Del</kbd> key. 
+  This does <strong>not</strong> put the deleted object(s) into the cut
+  buffer, so they cannot be pasted elsewhere.
+</p>
+
+<h2>Using normal cut and paste shortcuts</h2>
+<p>
+  Select the object(s) and then press <kbd class="mod1">x</kbd>. This puts
+  the deleted object(s) into the cut buffer so that they could be pasted
+  elsewhere.
+</p>
+
 <h2>Using just the mouse</h2>
-<p>By default, <kbd>Shift-right-click</kbd> will delete the clicked-upon object. Like the Delete key, this does <strong>not</strong> put the deleted object(s) into the cut buffer, so they cannot be pasted elsewhere.</p>
-<p>The modifier and mouse button used for this can be controlled via <code>Edit &gt; Preferences &gt; User Interaction &gt; Delete using ...</code>. Any modifier and mouse button combination can be used.</p>
+<p>
+  By default, <kbd class="mouse">Shift Right</kbd> will delete the
+  clicked-upon object. Like the Del key, this does <strong>not</strong> 
+  put the deleted object(s) into the cut buffer.
+</p>
+<p>
+  The modifier and mouse button used for this can be controlled via 
+  <kbd class="menu">Edit &gt; Preferences &gt; User Interaction &gt; 
+  Delete using ...</kbd>. Any modifier and mouse button combination can 
+  be used.
+</p>