typos and rephrasing

[ardour-manual] / include / transport-clocks.html

diff --git a/include/transport-clocks.html b/include/transport-clocks.html
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--- a/include/transport-clocks.html
+++ b/include/transport-clocks.html
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
   which is described below, but a few clocks serve particularly important roles.
 </p>
 <p>
   which is described below, but a few clocks serve particularly important roles.
 </p>
 <p>

-  In the transport bar of the editor window there are two clocks (unless you
-  are on a very small screen), that display the current position of the playhead
+  In the transport bar of the editor window there are two clocks (on a large enough
+  screen), that display the current position of the playhead

   and additional information related to transport control and the timeline. These
   are called the <dfn>transport clocks</dfn>; the left one is the primary
   transport clock and the right one is the secondary transport clock.
   and additional information related to transport control and the timeline. These
   are called the <dfn>transport clocks</dfn>; the left one is the primary
   transport clock and the right one is the secondary transport clock.


@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@
 <h2>Why are there two transport clocks?</h2>
 
 <p>
 <h2>Why are there two transport clocks?</h2>
 
 <p>

-  Having two transport clocks lets you see the playhead position in two different
-  time units without having to change any settings. For example, you can see the
+  Having two transport clocks allows seeing the playhead position in two different
+  time units without having to change any settings. For example, one can see the

   playhead position in both timecode units and BBT time.
 </p>
 
   playhead position in both timecode units and BBT time.
 </p>
 


@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 
 <p>
   In addition to the time-unit modes, each of the two transport
 
 <p>
   In addition to the time-unit modes, each of the two transport

-  clocks (if you work on a small screen, you may only have one) can be
+  clocks (again, on a sufficiently large screen) can be

   independently set to display <dfn>Delta to Edit Point</dfn> in whatever time
   units its current mode indicates. This setting means that the clock shows the
   distance between the playhead and the current edit point, and it may show a
   independently set to display <dfn>Delta to Edit Point</dfn> in whatever time
   units its current mode indicates. This setting means that the clock shows the
   distance between the playhead and the current edit point, and it may show a


@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
 <p>
   To show the current playhead position in a big, resizable window, activate
   <kbd class="menu">Window &gt; Big Clock</kbd>. The big clock is very useful
 <p>
   To show the current playhead position in a big, resizable window, activate
   <kbd class="menu">Window &gt; Big Clock</kbd>. The big clock is very useful

-  when you need to work away from the screen but still want to see the playhead
+  when working away from the screen but still wanting to see the playhead

   position clearly (such as when working with a remote control device across
   a room). The big clock will change its visual appearance to indicate when active
   recording is taking place. Below on the left is a screenshot showing a fairly
   position clearly (such as when working with a remote control device across
   a room). The big clock will change its visual appearance to indicate when active
   recording is taking place. Below on the left is a screenshot showing a fairly


@@ -79,4 +79,3 @@
 
 <a href="/images/bigclock.png"><img src="/images/bigclock.png" height="100" alt="an image of the big clock filling a screen"></a>
 <a href="/images/bigclock-recording.png"><img src="/images/bigclock-recording.png" height="100" alt="an image of the big clock while recording"></a>
 
 <a href="/images/bigclock.png"><img src="/images/bigclock.png" height="100" alt="an image of the big clock filling a screen"></a>
 <a href="/images/bigclock-recording.png"><img src="/images/bigclock-recording.png" height="100" alt="an image of the big clock while recording"></a>

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