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 <p>
   Ardour offers two modes for connecting automation control points: <kbd
 
 <p>
   Ardour offers two modes for connecting automation control points: <kbd

-  class=menu>Discrete</kbd> and <kbd class=menu>Linear</kbd>. To change the mode
-  right click on the automation lane header and choose your mode from the mode
-  menu.
+  class=menu>Discrete</kbd> and <kbd class=menu>Linear</kbd>. The mode is
+  changed by a right click on the automation lane header and choosing the
+  mode from the mode menu.

 </p>
 
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 </p>
 
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 <p>

-  If you record automation via MIDI (for example a pitch bend from a keyboard),
+  When recording automation via MIDI (for example a pitch bend from a keyboard),

   Ardour always uses discreet mode.
 </p>
 
 <p>
   <kbd class=menu>Linear</kbd> mode has straight lines betwen each point on the
   Ardour always uses discreet mode.
 </p>
 
 <p>
   <kbd class=menu>Linear</kbd> mode has straight lines betwen each point on the

-  automation track. This is useful when you want gradual shifts in your
-  automation lanes, such as gradual increase in volume on the fader.
+  automation track. This is useful for gradual shifts in automation lanes,
+  such as gradual increase in volume on the fader.

 
   Linear is the default mode for most automation lanes created via mouse input
   (versus recording via MIDI).
 
   Linear is the default mode for most automation lanes created via mouse input
   (versus recording via MIDI).